BEAUTIFUL YOU, TODAY AND TOMMOROWRank: 137
Backcover Text: My motivation for writing this book was for the western world as i have one of the friend is U.S who says that she spends thousands of dollars in creams and cosmetics and still she is not able to get the desired results which she wanted so i have given her certain suggestion that i have mentioned in this book of mine and that has worked for her and now she uses my methods and spends absolutely nothing on creams and cosmetics and thus saves lot of dollars. So,from there i had that motivation for writing this book as there are many women and men in the western world i.e is in US,Europe and Australia,who are not aware of these simple home remidies that can cure all their skin problems.I have complied all the methods into onr small book so that they dont have to go to skin specialista,libraries or internet to get the desired skin results.as i said in the begining my book has it all,to make your skin look beautiful and healthier. |
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Stage:
Completed work
Branch:
Non fiction
Major form:
Other
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Primary age group:
Grownup
Genres:
Health
Classification:
For everyone
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Hello Sujit, can I make a few suggestions.
Try and vary the text you say ‘glowing skin’ 4 times in the first paragraph, try and use some alternatives.
Put in metric measurements as an alternative.
I would read through the text for instance I would tidy up the sentence.:
‘Before writing this book I have researched a lot in regards to the home remedies for glowing skin that is spending nothing from your pocket but is very effective.’
Watch you commas and stops, sometimes they are ‘effective .Everyone’ instead of ‘effective. Everyone’
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